- Jun 16
How to transform your Literature Review from descriptive to analytical [with video at the end]
- Miguel Moital
- Literature Review
If your literature review reads like a list of quotations - “author A said this, author B said that, author C said something else” - you’re not analysing. You’re just collecting and repeating information. And let’s be honest: many students have fallen into the habit of copy‑pasting parts of articles into a Word document and hoping they will somehow turn into critical analysis later.
This happens because most students have never been taught how to analyse. Without a clear method, they repeat the same descriptive approach again and again. In this video, I walk you through how to move from description to analysis by building your own analytical structure step‑by‑step. The goal is simple: help you develop meaning and structure your thinking based on multiple sources, which is the foundation of every high‑quality literature review.
Why lists are not analysis
The inspiration for this video came from a dissertation support session I run where a student submitted a section based on the minority stress model. He had taken the mental health outcomes directly from the original paper and simply listed them as subthemes. It was neat and properly referenced, but completely descriptive.
And this example is far from unique. I see this pattern in dozens of drafts every year.
A strong literature review has a structure that is unique to your dissertation. It shows how you understand, group, connect, and interpret ideas from multiple sources. And that is exactly what I demonstrate in this video: how to take a simple descriptive list and turn it into a multi‑level analytical framework.
The six‑step process for building an analytical literature structure
Most descriptive literature reviews follow a predictable pattern: long lists of findings, disconnected quotations and themes lifted straight from individual papers. Analysis requires something different: a process that helps you reorganise information so you can isolate themes, interpret relationships, create a hierarchy and develop your own structure of the literature in a way that is unique to your dissertation.
In the video, I demonstrate these steps with a concrete example. Here, I’m explaining them in abstract form so you can understand the underlying process and apply it to any topic.
Step 1: Isolate themes clearly
Students often pick up themes from the literature without noticing that some items they treat as single ideas actually contain several distinct concepts. The first step is therefore to break down what you are reading into clearly separated themes. This gives you more analytical control and makes it easier to see patterns within the literature.
Step 2: Identify the central organising concept
Once the themes are isolated, the next step is determining the overarching concept that unites them. This requires stepping back and asking: What broad idea are these themes actually describing? What do they sit under? Correctly identifying this top‑level theme allows you to organise the structure logically and ensures that the hierarchy of ideas reflects what the literature is really about.
Step 3: Reposition subthemes in the correct hierarchy
Analytical structures are hierarchical. After determining the central theme, you re‑evaluate where each subtheme properly belongs. Some ideas that students initially place at the top level are actually subcomponents of a broader concept. Moving them into the right position strengthens the coherence of the analysis and prevents the structure from feeling fragmented.
Step 4: Categorise long lists to prevent descriptiveness
Descriptive reviews often contain long lists of points, all sitting at the same level. Analysis requires grouping items based on shared characteristics and turning lists into categories. This step transforms the structure by revealing relationships and highlighting patterns that are not obvious when everything is presented at the same level. Some themes will cluster together naturally, while others may temporarily stand alone until the structure grows further.
Step 5: Enrich the structure by “probing” the literature
Once you have your initial framework, you develop it by actively searching the literature for additional insights. It's about asking analytical questions and then finding the answer in existing or newly collected papers. Questions you can ask include:
❓ What other types of this concept have been identified?
❓ Do other authors expand or refine the themes I already have?
❓ Where do new findings fit within my structure?
With every new source, you either reinforce existing themes with further evidence, or expand the framework by adding new themes/subthemes. Over time, this results in a richer and multi‑layered structure that reflects your interpretation of the field.
Step 6: Write analytically on top of your structure
Once your structure is complete, writing becomes fast and intuitive. Because your thinking is already organised, you can simply convert the hierarchy of themes into paragraphs. Analytical writing flows naturally from an analytical structure: the text focuses on themes, not authors, and each theme is supported by multiple sources rather than a single citation.
Want more support?
If you’d like to see this full process demonstrated step by step, including how the structure evolves and how easily the final writing emerges from it, watch the video below. Inside the Virtual Tutor resource, you’ll also find a longer and extended version of the video with additional examples and more detailed guidance. In this resource there many others videos that explain the SALA - Structured Approach to Literature Analysis, which is the most intuitive and effective method of writing a critical literature review.
And if you want help applying this approach to your own dissertation, I offer personalised one‑to‑one supervision where we build and refine your literature analysis together. Feel free to get in touch anytime by dropping me an email.
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